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Saturday 31 January 2009

"Weather Changes" by Ryan, Age 11

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Weather Changes

Summer is here sunny shining,
Waving its arms about,
Its time to play on the beach today,
Time to run and run and run and shout.

Autumn is coming leaves are falling,
Like planes running out of fuel,
The trees leaves are becoming scarce,
They are old men growing bald.

Winter weather is horrible,
Time for hat, scarf and gloves.
Now all the leaves have died down,
There are none left at all.
I can’t wait for summer to come around again.


By Ryan
Age 11

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"My Dad Is Back!!" by Megan, Age 11

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My Dad Is Back!!

Miserable and tired, lying in hospital,
Yes, still not back at home.

Desperate to arrive back to home sweet home,
And trying hard to walk around.
Days go by and improvement begins.

I was waiting for months and months,
Still no notice or sign.

Beginning a different month, yes it’s Christmas!!
At last he had arrived,
Close to Christmas Eve.
Keeping good care of my dad, and all my family were as happy as a family should be!!


By Megan
Age 11
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"The Weather Changes" by John, Age 10

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The Weather Changes

The golden sun’s shining,
Not a cloud in sight.
Gleaming like a shining torch,
It’s very, very bright.

Next day the sky is grey.
There are even thunder storms.
Rain, thunder and lightning,
People trying to keep warm.

At last the rain has stopped.
Replaced by the sun again.
Children running to the beach,
As the sun smiles down at them.

By John Age 10

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"A Young Foal" by Jasmine, Age 10

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A Young Foal

It’s the first day of April
A new foal is born.
The mother gets a huge shock,
How cute, it’s a boy!

His mother sniffs and soothes him.
Breeze is his new name.
His black shining fur, so soft,
Soft as velvet fur.

Trotting round and round the field,
Making some new friends.
Playing together each day,
Now he can gallop.

Galloping by the old mill,
The sun shines on him.
He’s growing up so well,
Soon he’ll be a horse.


By Jasmine
Age 10

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"My Brilliant New Puppy" by Alicia, Age 9

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My Brilliant New Puppy

His fur as silky as a piece of velvet.
Inside a piece of velvet, a sweet jumpy dog.
Inside a jumpy dog, a fierce beast.
Inside a fierce beast, a calm cautious dog.
Inside a calm cautious dog, a nervous hound.
Inside a nervous hound, a sweet hearted puppy.
Inside a sweet hearted puppy, a heart thumping.


By Alicia
Age 9

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"Wolf Pup" By Izzi, Age 10

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Wolf Pup

Wolves sleeping in the den,
The snow is falling down, down, down,
A new wolf pup is born,
Her fur is as white as the snow.

The wolf pup is called Star,
Eyes shining like the big, round moon.
Tail never stops wagging,
And her ears are softer than silk.

Star is playful and fun.
Her howl is like a lullaby,
That fills the deep, dark, night.
Star is a shining star, so bright.

By Izzi
Age 10

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"My New Shoes" by Hayley, Age 10

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My New Shoes

I’ve got some new shiny shoes,
I only know,
They squeak like a mouse,
As I move to and fro.

Talking to me as I move,
Saying “Hurry up I need to go.”
Saying goodbye to them as they move,

back to the cupboard for another nights sleep.

By Hayley
Age 10

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"The Frog" by Hannah, Age 10

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The Frog


The day I woke up I saw a tadpole swimming around the pond,

Head like a speck of dust.

Earlier it was tiny but now it’s grown legs.


Fish swim around the frog as it starts to lose its tail.

Running, running, running kicking its legs wildly.

Over at last, the cycle is complete.

Goodbye frog as it hops off into the wild.


By Hannah
Age 10

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"My New Puppy" by Georgina, Age 9

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My New Puppy.

She’s very, very small.
In the dead of the night she

will howl and call.
For me her eyes light
And sometimes she will bite.

I love to call her name.
She’s doubled in her size,
And me you can not blame.
She never ever cries,
She’s doubled in her size.

She’s so very cute,
I love the way she licks my toe,
And lies next to the window

And she’s so very sweet also.
She is called Roxy.


By Georgina
Age 9

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"Barack Obama" by Patrick, Age 9

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Barack Obama


He was not well known.
He was in no place of power,
Just a few months ago.
Now he is on the throne,
The White House in his grasp.

Getting down to business,
Withdrawing troops from Iraq.
Spreading peace across the globe,
America rejoices under his rule.
He is the one and only.

By Patrick
Age 9

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"Barack Obama" by Isaac, Age 10

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Barack Obama

He was just a normal man,
now he is a king ,
the first black president.
USA has had a change,
The White house is his.
There is no stopping him now,
Everybody shall bow.
Now he has the states in his hand,
He is like a God in the heaven’s above.
He is a powerful man,
a ruler of everyone.
A ruler, a king .
He is stopping criminals,
Americans bow for a man.
A man who is a king!!!


By Isaac
Age 10

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"My New Car" by Charlie, Age 10

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My New Car

Our car is a diesel,
It is an Audi estate,
An A4 Quatro car,
It is perfect for me.

Fitting the family
In our brilliant car.
We travel to school and back.
It stops for a good nights sleep.


By Charlie
Age 10
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"A New Puppy" by Emma, Age 9

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A New Puppy

A puppy playing by his mum,
chasing his little tail.
So cute so small.

A pup as bouncy as a ball,
Rolling in the thick mud.
Muddy puppy!

A puppy running through the large field,
Playing with the flowers,
Without a care.

A puppy like a fierce lion,
The puppy is a jet.
How sweet how cute!


By Emma
Age 9

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